Improve wording

MAS/All-In-One-Version-KL/MAS_AIO.cmd

@@ -3618,10 +3618,10 @@ reg unload HKU\!defname! %nul%
 
 if defined vnextexist (
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Office vNext subscription detected:"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If active, this license overrides other activation methods."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If expiring soon, rerun the script after expiration."
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If expired and script activation fails, get help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "The logged-in Office account has a subscription license."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If the subscription is active, it overrides other activation methods."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If it is expiring soon, rerun the activation script after it expires."
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If it has already expired and activation fails, get help here - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 echo:
 )
 
@@ -5899,16 +5899,18 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "In Windows settings, you may see a renewal notification f
 if /i %_actmethod%==Auto call :dk_color %Gray% "To avoid this notification, run the script with an internet connection to use the StaticCID method."
 )
 echo "%tsids%" | find /i "7e94be23-b161-4956-a682-146ab291774c" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update can receive 1-3 years of ESU. 4-6 years ESU is not officially supported, but you can manually install updates."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update gets 1-3 years of ESU; 4-6 are unofficial but let you install Server 2008 R2 updates manually."
 )
 echo "%tsids%" | findstr /i "4afc620f-12a4-48ad-8015-2aebfbd6e47c 11be7019-a309-4763-9a09-091d1722ffe3" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "ESU is not officially supported on Windows 8.1, but you can manually install updates until Jan-2024."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "ESU is not officially supported on Windows 8.1, but updates can be installed manually until January 2024."
 )
 echo "%tsids%" | findstr /i "0b533b5e-08b6-44f9-b885-c2de291ba456 f69e2d51-3bbd-4ddf-8da7-a145e9dca597" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update can receive 1-3 years of ESU. 4-6 years ESU is not officially supported, but it might be useful."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update gets 1-3 years of ESU; 4-6 are unofficial but may let you install LTSC updates manually."
 )
 )
 
+if defined esuexistsup echo Help: %mas%tsforge#windows-esu
+
 if %_actwin%==1 for %%# in (407) do if %osSKU%==%%# (
 call :dk_color %Red% "%winos% does not support activation on non-azure platforms."
 )

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

@@ -1513,10 +1513,10 @@ reg unload HKU\!defname! %nul%
 
 if defined vnextexist (
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Office vNext subscription detected:"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If active, this license overrides other activation methods."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If expiring soon, rerun the script after expiration."
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If expired and script activation fails, get help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "The logged-in Office account has a subscription license."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If the subscription is active, it overrides other activation methods."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If it is expiring soon, rerun the activation script after it expires."
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If it has already expired and activation fails, get help here - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 echo:
 )
 

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

@@ -1491,10 +1491,10 @@ reg unload HKU\!defname! %nul%
 
 if defined vnextexist (
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Office vNext subscription detected:"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If active, this license overrides other activation methods."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If expiring soon, rerun the script after expiration."
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If expired and script activation fails, get help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "The logged-in Office account has a subscription license."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If the subscription is active, it overrides other activation methods."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If it is expiring soon, rerun the activation script after it expires."
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If it has already expired and activation fails, get help here - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 echo:
 )
 

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/TSforge_Activation.cmd

@@ -1959,16 +1959,18 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "In Windows settings, you may see a renewal notification f
 if /i %_actmethod%==Auto call :dk_color %Gray% "To avoid this notification, run the script with an internet connection to use the StaticCID method."
 )
 echo "%tsids%" | find /i "7e94be23-b161-4956-a682-146ab291774c" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update can receive 1-3 years of ESU. 4-6 years ESU is not officially supported, but you can manually install updates."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update gets 1-3 years of ESU; 4-6 are unofficial but let you install Server 2008 R2 updates manually."
 )
 echo "%tsids%" | findstr /i "4afc620f-12a4-48ad-8015-2aebfbd6e47c 11be7019-a309-4763-9a09-091d1722ffe3" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "ESU is not officially supported on Windows 8.1, but you can manually install updates until Jan-2024."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "ESU is not officially supported on Windows 8.1, but updates can be installed manually until January 2024."
 )
 echo "%tsids%" | findstr /i "0b533b5e-08b6-44f9-b885-c2de291ba456 f69e2d51-3bbd-4ddf-8da7-a145e9dca597" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update can receive 1-3 years of ESU. 4-6 years ESU is not officially supported, but it might be useful."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Windows Update gets 1-3 years of ESU; 4-6 are unofficial but may let you install LTSC updates manually."
 )
 )
 
+if defined esuexistsup echo Help: %mas%tsforge#windows-esu
+
 if %_actwin%==1 for %%# in (407) do if %osSKU%==%%# (
 call :dk_color %Red% "%winos% does not support activation on non-azure platforms."
 )
@@ -2454,10 +2456,10 @@ reg unload HKU\!defname! %nul%
 
 if defined vnextexist (
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Office vNext subscription detected:"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If active, this license overrides other activation methods."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If expiring soon, rerun the script after expiration."
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If expired and script activation fails, get help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "The logged-in Office account has a subscription license."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If the subscription is active, it overrides other activation methods."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If it is expiring soon, rerun the activation script after it expires."
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "If it has already expired and activation fails, get help here - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 echo:
 )