Fix many grammar/spelling issues in the script (#543)

* Proof-read Change Edition script

* .

* Proof-read OEM folder script

* Update Change_Edition.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update KMS38_Activation.cmd

* Add files via upload

* Update Change_Edition.cmd

* I'm tired

* Update Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* finish with hwid

* Update KMS38_Activation.cmd

* final kms38 update

* Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

* start ohook

* Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

* Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

* Update HWID_Activation.cmd

* Update KMS38_Activation.cmd

* Update Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

* Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

* Update Change_Edition.cmd

* Update Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd

* Update Troubleshoot.cmd

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Co-authored-by: nekoppai <109633131+nekoppai@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: WindowsAddict <windowsaddict@protonmail.com>

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/HWID_Activation.cmd

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -160,22 +160,22 @@ call :dk_setvar
 if %winbuild% LSS 10240 (
 %eline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo HWID Activation is supported only for Windows 10/11.
+echo HWID Activation is only supported on Windows 10/11.
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Use Online KMS Activation option."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Use Online KMS activation option."
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-Server*Edition~*.mum" (
 %eline%
-echo HWID Activation is not supported for Windows Server.
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Use KMS38 or Online KMS Activation option."
+echo HWID Activation is not supported on Windows Server.
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Use KMS38 or Online KMS activation option."
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -195,8 +195,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto dk_done
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -296,14 +296,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ ClipUp.exe
 ) do (
 if not exist %SysPath%\%%# (
 %eline%
-echo [%SysPath%\%%#] file is missing. Aborting...
+echo [%SysPath%\%%#] file is missing, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -356,12 +356,12 @@ if defined _perm (
 cls
 echo ___________________________________________________________________________________________
 echo:
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Green% "Checking: %winos% is Permanently Activated."
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Green% "%winos% is already permanently activated."
 call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Gray% "Activation is not required."
 echo ___________________________________________________________________________________________
 if %_unattended%==1 goto dk_done
 echo:
-choice /C:10 /N /M ">    [1] Activate [0] %_exitmsg% : "
+choice /C:10 /N /M ">    [1] Activate Anyway [0] %_exitmsg% : "
 if errorlevel 2 exit /b
 )
 cls
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2
 %eline%
 echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild%]
 echo:
-echo Evaluation Editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period. 
+echo Evaluation editions cannot be activated outside of their evaluation period. 
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%evaluation_editions
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%evaluation_editions"
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ echo Checking Internet Connection            [Connected%ping_f%]
 ) else (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Internet Connection            [Not Connected]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Internet is required for HWID Activation."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Internet is required for HWID activation."
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -457,13 +457,13 @@ if not defined key (
 %eline%
 echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild% ^| SKU:%osSKU%]
 if not defined skunotfound (
-echo This product does not support HWID Activation.
-echo Try KMS38 Activation option.
-echo Make sure you are using updated version of the script.
+echo This product does not support HWID activation.
+echo Make sure you are using the latest version of the script.
+echo If you are, then try KMS38 activation option.
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%
 echo %mas%
 ) else (
-echo Required License files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\
+echo Required license files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -479,12 +479,12 @@ if defined notworking set error=1
 
 echo:
 if defined changekey (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] Edition product key will be used to enable HWID activation."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] edition product key will be used to enable HWID activation."
 echo:
 )
 
 if defined winsub (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. Script will activate base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] detected. Script will activate base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
 echo:
 )
 
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ call :hwiddata ticket
 copy /y /b "%tdir%\GenuineTicket" "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml" %nul%
 
 if not exist "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml" (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Generating GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed, aborting the process]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Generating GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed, aborting...]"
 echo [%encoded%]
 if exist "%tdir%\Genuine*" del /f /q "%tdir%\Genuine*" %nul%
 goto :dl_final
@@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ set "_xmlexist=if exist "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml""
 %_xmlexist% (
 set error=1
 if exist "%tdir%\*.xml" del /f /q "%tdir%\*.xml" %nul%
-call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed With ClipSVC Service Restart, Wait...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed with ClipSVC service restart, wait...]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -604,7 +604,7 @@ reg delete "%_ident%" /f %nul%
 reg query "%_ident%" %nul% && (
 echo:
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Deleting an IdentityCRL Registry        [Failed] [%_ident%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Deleting IdentityCRL Registry           [Failed] [%_ident%]"
 )
 for %%# in (wlidsvc LicenseManager sppsvc) do (%psc% "Start-Job { Restart-Service %%# } | Wait-Job -Timeout 10 | Out-Null")
 call :dk_refresh
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ if not defined resfail (
 if defined resfail (
 set error=1
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Licensing Servers              [Failed To Connect]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Licensing Servers              [Failed to Connect]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%licensing-servers-issue
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%licensing-servers-issue"
 )
@@ -702,8 +702,8 @@ call :dk_color %Green% "%winos% is permanently activated with a digital license.
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Activation Failed %error_code%"
 if defined notworking (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "At the time of writing this, HWID Activation was not supported for this product."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Use KMS38 Activation option."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "At the time of writing, HWID Activation is not supported for this product."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Use KMS38 activation option instead."
 ) else (
 if not defined error call :dk_color %Blue% "%_fixmsg%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -1072,7 +1072,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)
 )
 )
-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"
+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"
 
 sc start sppsvc %nul%
 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (
@@ -1092,7 +1092,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
 if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -1111,7 +1112,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found. Script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -1202,7 +1203,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"
 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."
 set showfix=1
 )
 )
@@ -1242,7 +1243,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error             [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -1281,7 +1282,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osed
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File                   [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1352,7 +1353,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
 
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg               [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -1377,7 +1378,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1407,9 +1408,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1527,7 +1528,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist"
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -1538,7 +1539,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -1546,7 +1547,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -1585,13 +1586,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/KMS38_Activation.cmd

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -166,19 +166,19 @@ set "specific_kms=SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectio
 if %winbuild% LSS 14393 (
 %eline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo KMS38 Activation is supported for Windows 10/11/Server, build 14393 and later.
+echo KMS38 activation is only supported on Windows 10/11/Server, build 14393 and later.
 echo:
 if %winbuild% LSS 10240 (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Use Online KMS Activation option."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Use Online KMS activation option."
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Use HWID Activation option."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Use HWID activation option."
 )
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -198,8 +198,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto dk_done
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -299,14 +299,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ echo:
 echo                 [0] %_exitmsg%
 echo         ____________________________________________________________
 echo: 
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "              " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,2,0]"
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "              " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,2,0]"
 choice /C:120 /N
 set _el=!errorlevel!
 if !_el!==3  exit /b
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\ClipUp.exe if not defined a_cor (set _fmiss=%_fmiss%ClipU
 
 if defined _fmiss (
 %eline%
-echo [%_fmiss%] file is missing. Aborting...
+echo [%_fmiss%] file is missing, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -395,12 +395,12 @@ if defined _perm (
 cls
 echo ___________________________________________________________________________________________
 echo:
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Green% "Checking: %winos% is Permanently Activated."
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Green% "%winos% is already permanently activated."
 call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Gray% "Activation is not required."
 echo ___________________________________________________________________________________________
 if %_unattended%==1 goto dk_done
 echo:
-choice /C:10 /N /M ">    [1] Activate [0] %_exitmsg% : "
+choice /C:10 /N /M ">    [1] Activate Anyway [0] %_exitmsg% : "
 if errorlevel 2 exit /b
 )
 cls
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ echo Server Evaluation cannot be activated. Convert it to full Server OS.
 echo:
 call :dk_color %Blue% "Go Back to main menu and use [Change Edition] option."
 ) else (
-echo Evaluation Editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period. 
+echo Evaluation editions cannot be activated outside of their evaluation period. 
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%evaluation_editions
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%evaluation_editions"
@@ -441,9 +441,9 @@ goto dk_done
 if defined a_cor (
 if not exist "!_work!\clipup.exe" (
 %eline%
-echo clipup.exe doesn't exist in Server Cor/Acor [No GUI] version.
-echo It's required for KMS38 Activation.
-echo Check below page on how to activate it.
+echo clipup.exe doesn't exist in Server Cor/Acor [No GUI] versions.
+echo The file is required for KMS38 activation.
+echo Check the below page for instructions on how to activate it.
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%kms38
 echo %mas%kms38
 goto dk_done
@@ -496,24 +496,24 @@ set /a UBR=0
 if %osSKU%==191 if defined altkey if defined altedition (
 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v UBR %nul6%') do if not errorlevel 1 set /a UBR=%%b
 if %winbuild% LSS 22598 if !UBR! LSS 2788 (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must to be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS KMS38 activation."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS KMS38 activation."
 )
 )
 
 if not defined key if defined notfoundaltactID (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For KMS38    [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition for KMS38    [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]"
 )
 
 if not defined key if not defined _gvlk (
 %eline%
 echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild% ^| SKU:%osSKU%]
 if not defined skunotfound (
-echo This product does not support KMS38 Activation.
-echo Make sure you are using updated version of the script.
+echo This product does not support KMS38 activation.
+echo Make sure you are using the latest version of the script.
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%
 echo %mas%
 ) else (
-echo Required License files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\
+echo Required license files were not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -527,12 +527,12 @@ goto dk_done
 
 echo:
 if defined changekey (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] Edition product key will be used to enable KMS38 activation."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] edition product key will be used to enable KMS38 activation."
 echo:
 )
 
 if defined winsub (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. Script will activate base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription edition [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. Script will activate the base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
 echo:
 )
 
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@ set "sessionId=TwBTAE0AYQBqAG8AcgBWAGUAcgBzAGkAbwBuAD0ANQA7AE8AUwBNAGkAbgBvAHIAV
 copy /y /b "%tdir%\GenuineTicket" "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml" %nul%
 
 if not exist "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml" (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Generating GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed, aborting the process]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Generating GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed, aborting...]"
 if exist "%tdir%\Genuine*" del /f /q "%tdir%\Genuine*" %nul%
 goto :k_final
 ) else (
@@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "Stopping sppsvc Service                 [Failed]"
 %_xmlexist% (
 set error=1
 if exist "%tdir%\*.xml" del /f /q "%tdir%\*.xml" %nul%
-call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed With ClipSVC Service Restart, Wait...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed with ClipSVC service restart, wait...]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -732,16 +732,16 @@ call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 
 :k_final
 
-::  Remove the added Specific KMS Host (Local Host) if activation is not completed
+::  Remove the specific KMS host (LocalHost) added by the script if activation is not completed
 
 echo:
 if not defined _k38 (
 %nul% reg delete "HKLM\%specific_kms%" /f
 %nul% reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\%specific_kms%" /f
 %nul% reg query "HKLM\%specific_kms%" && (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Removing The Added Specific KMS Host    [Failed]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Removing the Added Specific KMS Host    [Failed]"
 ) || (
-echo Removing The Added Specific KMS Host    [Successful]
+echo Removing the Added Specific KMS Host    [Successful]
 )
 )
 
@@ -751,9 +751,9 @@ if defined _k38 (
 %psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':regdel\:.*';& ([ScriptBlock]::Create($f[1])) -protect"
 %nul% reg delete "HKLM\%specific_kms%" /f
 %nul% reg query "HKLM\%specific_kms%" && (
-echo Protect KMS38 From KMS                  [Successful] [Locked A Registry Key]
+echo Protect KMS38 From KMS                  [Successful] [Locked a Registry Key]
 ) || (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Protect KMS38 From KMS                  [Failed To Lock A Registry Key]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Protect KMS38 From KMS                  [Failed to Lock a Registry Key]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -763,9 +763,9 @@ if defined a_cor if exist "%_clipup%" del /f /q "%_clipup%" %nul%
 
 if defined a_cor (
 if exist "%_clipup%" (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Deleting copied clipup.exe file         [Failed]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Deleting Copied clipup.exe File         [Failed]"
 ) else (
-echo Deleting copied clipup.exe file         [Successful]
+echo Deleting Copied clipup.exe File         [Successful]
 )
 )
 
@@ -1215,7 +1215,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -1224,7 +1224,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)
 )
 )
-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"
+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"
 
 sc start sppsvc %nul%
 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (
@@ -1235,7 +1235,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
 if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -1254,7 +1255,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found. Script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -1345,7 +1346,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"
 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."
 set showfix=1
 )
 )
@@ -1385,7 +1386,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error             [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -1424,7 +1425,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osed
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File                   [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1495,7 +1496,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
 
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg               [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -1520,7 +1521,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1550,9 +1551,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1670,7 +1671,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist"
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -1681,7 +1682,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -1689,7 +1690,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -1728,13 +1729,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -160,15 +160,15 @@ call :dk_setvar
 if %winbuild% LSS 9200 (
 %eline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Ohook Activation is supported on Windows 8 and later and their server equivalent.
+echo Ohook Activation is supported only on Windows 8/10/11 and their server equivalents.
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Use Online KMS Activation option."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Use Online KMS activation option instead."
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto dk_done
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -289,14 +289,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ echo:
 echo                 [0] %_exitmsg%
 echo         ____________________________________________________________
 echo: 
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "              " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,2,3,0]"
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "              " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,2,3,0]"
 choice /C:1230 /N
 set _el=!errorlevel!
 if !_el!==4  exit /b
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 
 if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe (
 %eline%
-echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing. Aborting...
+echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -456,10 +456,10 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Office               [Not Found]"
 
 if defined ohub (
 echo:
-echo You have only Office dashboard app installed, you need to install full Office version.
+echo You only have the Office dashboard app installed, you need to install the full version of Office.
 )
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Download and install Office from below URL and try again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Download and install Office from the below URL and then try again."
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%genuine-installation-media
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "%mas%genuine-installation-media"
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if not "%o16c2r%%o15c2r%%o16msi%%o15msi%"=="1" set multioffice=1
 if not "%o14msi%%o14c2r%%o16uwp%"=="" set multioffice=1
 
 if defined multioffice (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking Multiple Office Install        [Found. Recommended to install one version only]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking Multiple Office Install        [Found, its recommended to install only one version]"
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ reg add "%kmskey%" /f /v KeyManagementServiceName /t REG_SZ /d "10.0.0.10" /reg:
 )
 reg delete "%kmskey%" /f %nul%
 reg add "%kmskey%" /f /v KeyManagementServiceName /t REG_SZ /d "10.0.0.10" %nul%
-echo Adding a Reg To Prevent Banner          [Successful]
+echo Adding a Registry to Prevent Banner     [Successful]
 )
 )
 
@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ call :oh_reset
 call :oh_getpath
 
 echo:
-echo Uninstalling Ohook Activation...
+echo Uninstalling Ohook activation...
 echo:
 
 if defined o16c2r_reg (for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('"reg query %o16c2r_reg% /v InstallPath" %nul6%') do (set "_16CHook=%%b\root\vfs"))
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ if exist "%%~A\Microsoft %%~G\root\vfs\%%#\sppc*dll" (set _present=1& del /s /f
 
 reg query HKCU\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency %nul% && (
 echo:
-echo Deleting - Registry keys to skip license check from all ^& future new useraccounts
+echo Deleting - Registry keys for skipping license check
 
 reg load HKU\DEF_TEMP %SystemDrive%\Users\Default\NTUSER.DAT %nul%
 reg query HKU\DEF_TEMP\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency %nul% && reg delete HKU\DEF_TEMP\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /f
@@ -723,7 +723,7 @@ reg unload HKU\%%# %nul%
 set "kmskey=HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663"
 reg query "%kmskey%" %nul% && (
 echo:
-echo Deleting - Registry keys to prevent non-genuine banner
+echo Deleting - Registry keys for preventing non-genuine banner
 reg delete "%kmskey%" /f
 )
 
@@ -735,16 +735,16 @@ echo ___________________________________________________________________________
 echo:
 
 if not defined _present (
-echo Ohook Activation is not installed.
+echo Ohook activation is not installed.
 ) else (
 if defined _unerror (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Failed to uninstall Ohook activation."
 call :oh_checkapps
 if defined checknames (
 call :dk_color %Blue% "Close [!checknames!] and try again."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If its still not resolved then restart system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If it is still not fixed, then restart your system and try again."
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
 )
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %Green% "Successfully uninstalled Ohook activation."
@@ -919,11 +919,11 @@ if not exist "%_hookPath%\sppc.dll" (if not defined ierror set ierror=Copy)
 
 echo:
 if not defined ierror (
-echo Symlinking System's sppc.dll To         ["%_hookPath%\sppcs.dll"] [Successful]
+echo Symlinking System's sppc.dll to         ["%_hookPath%\sppcs.dll"] [Successful]
 if defined exhook (
-echo Copying Custom %_hook% To            ["%_hookPath%\sppc.dll"] [Successful]
+echo Copying Custom %_hook% to            ["%_hookPath%\sppc.dll"] [Successful]
 ) else (
-echo Extracting Custom %_hook% To         ["%_hookPath%\sppc.dll"] [Successful]
+echo Extracting Custom %_hook% to         ["%_hookPath%\sppc.dll"] [Successful]
 )
 ) else (
 set error=1
@@ -932,9 +932,9 @@ echo:
 call :oh_checkapps
 if defined checknames (
 call :dk_color %Blue% "Close [!checknames!] and try again."
-call :dk_color %Blue% "If its still not resolved then restart system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "If it is still not fixed, then restart your system and try again."
 ) else (
-if /i not "%ierror%"=="Copy" call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart system and try again."
+if /i not "%ierror%"=="Copy" call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
 if /i "%ierror%"=="Copy" call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 )
 echo:
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@ call :dk_inskey "[!key!] [!_prod!] [!_lic!]"
 ) else (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Product In Script              [Office %oVer%.0 !_prod! not found in script]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Make sure you are using Latest MAS script."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Make sure you are using the latest version of MAS."
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "%mas%"
 )
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@ if defined winserver if defined _config (
 echo %_oIds% | find /i "Retail" %nul1% && (
 set scaIsNeeded=1
 reg add %_config% /v SharedComputerLicensing /t REG_SZ /d "1" /f %nul1%
-echo Adding SharedComputerLicensing Reg      [Successful] [Needed On Server With Retail Office]"
+echo Adding SharedComputerLicensing Reg      [Successful] [Needed on Server With Retail Office]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -1043,13 +1043,13 @@ echo Activating Office...                    [MSI ^| %_version% ^| %_oArch%]
 
 if not defined _oBranding (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking BRANDING.XML                   [Not Found. Aborting activation...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking BRANDING.XML                   [Not Found, aborting activation...]"
 exit /b
 )
 
 if not defined _oIds (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Products             [Product IDs not found. Aborting activation...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Products             [Product IDs not found, aborting activation...]"
 exit /b
 )
 
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwarePr
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\59a52881-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%
 
-echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully Cleared From All %counter% Useraccounts]
+echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully cleared from all %counter% user accounts]
 
 ::==========================
 
@@ -1208,7 +1208,7 @@ for %%# in (%_sidlist%) do (
 reg delete HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /f %nul%
 reg add HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /v "TimeOfLastHeartbeatFailure" /t REG_SZ /d "2040-01-01T00:00:00Z" /f %nul%
 )
-echo Adding Reg Keys To Skip License Check   [Successfully Added To All %counter% ^& Future New Useraccounts]
+echo Adding Reg Keys to Skip License Check   [Successfully added to all %counter% ^& future new user accounts]
 )
 
 ::==========================
@@ -1222,14 +1222,14 @@ reg query HKU\%%# %nul% && set failedtounload=1
 
 if defined failedtoload (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded Accounts Registry      [Failed for some user accounts]"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
 )
 
 if defined failedtounload (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading loaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading Loaded Account Registries     [Failed for some user accounts]"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
 )
 
 exit /b
@@ -1524,7 +1524,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)
 )
 )
-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"
+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"
 
 sc start sppsvc %nul%
 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (
@@ -1544,7 +1544,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
 if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -1563,7 +1564,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found. Script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -1654,7 +1655,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"
 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."
 set showfix=1
 )
 )
@@ -1694,7 +1695,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error             [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -1733,7 +1734,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osed
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File                   [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1804,7 +1805,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
 
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg               [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -1829,7 +1830,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1859,9 +1860,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1979,7 +1980,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist"
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -1990,7 +1991,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -1998,7 +1999,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -2037,13 +2038,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -191,13 +191,13 @@ call :dk_setvar
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent.
+echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -217,8 +217,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto dk_done
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -318,14 +318,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ echo               [9] Download Office
 echo               [0] %_exitmsg%
 echo        ______________________________________________________________
 echo:
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "           " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,0]"
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "           " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,0]"
 choice /C:1234567890 /N
 set _el=!errorlevel!
 
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 
 if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe (
 %eline%
-echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing. Aborting...
+echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-Server*EvalCorEditio
 
 if defined _eval (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% && (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Edition                   [Evaluation Editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Evaluation Edition             [Evaluation editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]"
 
 if defined _evalserv (
 call :dk_color %Blue% "Go back to main menu and use [Change Edition] option."
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ set /a UBR=0
 if %osSKU%==191 if defined altkey if defined altedition (
 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v UBR %nul6%') do if not errorlevel 1 set /a UBR=%%b
 if %winbuild% LSS 22598 if !UBR! LSS 2788 (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must to be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation."
 )
 )
 
@@ -557,11 +557,11 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For %KS%      [%altedition% Act
 if not defined key if not defined _gvlk (
 echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild% ^| SKU:%osSKU%]
 if not defined skunotfound (
-echo This product does not support %KS% Activation.
+echo This product does not support %KS% activation.
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%unsupported_products_activation
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%unsupported_products_activation"
 ) else (
-echo Required License files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\
+echo Required license files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ goto :ks_office
 ::  Install key
 
 if defined changekey (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] Edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation."
 echo:
 )
 
@@ -1291,7 +1291,7 @@ reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwarePr
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\59a52881-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%
 
-echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully Cleared From All %counter% Useraccounts]
+echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully cleared from all %counter% user accounts]
 
 ::==========================
 
@@ -1309,7 +1309,7 @@ for %%# in (%_sidlist%) do (
 reg delete HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /f %nul%
 reg add HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /v "TimeOfLastHeartbeatFailure" /t REG_SZ /d "2040-01-01T00:00:00Z" /f %nul%
 )
-echo Adding Reg Keys To Skip License Check   [Successfully Added To All %counter% ^& Future New Useraccounts]
+echo Adding Reg Keys to Skip License Check   [Successfully added to all %counter% ^& future new user accounts]
 )
 
 ::==========================
@@ -1323,14 +1323,14 @@ reg query HKU\%%# %nul% && set failedtounload=1
 
 if defined failedtoload (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded Accounts Registry      [Failed for some user accounts]"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
 )
 
 if defined failedtounload (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading loaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading Loaded Account Registries     [Failed for some user accounts]"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
 )
 
 exit /b
@@ -2573,7 +2573,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -2582,7 +2582,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)
 )
 )
-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"
+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"
 
 sc start sppsvc %nul%
 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (
@@ -2593,7 +2593,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
 if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -2612,7 +2613,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found. Script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -2703,7 +2704,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"
 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."
 set showfix=1
 )
 )
@@ -2743,7 +2744,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error             [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -2782,7 +2783,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osed
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File                   [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -2853,7 +2854,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
 
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg               [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -2878,7 +2879,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -2908,9 +2909,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -3028,7 +3029,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist"
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -3039,7 +3040,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -3047,7 +3048,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -3086,13 +3087,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Change_Edition.cmd

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ set _stg=0
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -127,13 +127,13 @@ set "line=echo _________________________________________________________________
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent.
+echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -153,8 +153,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto dk_done
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -254,14 +254,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ if not defined desktop for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "& {write-host $([Environ
 
 if not defined desktop (
 %eline%
-echo Desktop location was not detected, aborting...
+echo Unable to detect Desktop location, aborting...
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ dism.exe
 ) do (
 if not exist %SysPath%\%%# (
 %eline%
-echo [%SysPath%\%%#] file is missing. Aborting...
+echo [%SysPath%\%%#] file is missing, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ if defined UBR (set "fullbuild=%%G.!UBR!") else (set "fullbuild=%%G.%%H")
 call :dk_actid 55c92734-d682-4d71-983e-d6ec3f16059f
 if not defined apps (
 %eline%
-echo Either key is not insalled or failed to get installed key activation ID. Aborting...
+echo Either key is not insalled or script failed to get installed key's activation ID. Aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if %_wmic% EQU 0 set "chkedi=for /f "tokens=2 delims==" %%a in ('%psc% "(([WMISE
 
 if %osedition%==0 (
 %eline%
-echo Failed to detect OS Edition. Aborting...
+echo Failed to detect OS edition, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Get Target editions list
+::  Get target editions list
 
 set _target=
 set _dtarget=
@@ -403,9 +403,9 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "==== Note ===="
 echo:
 echo [EditionID:%osedition% ^| %fullbuild%]
 echo:
-echo Changing this edition to any other may not remove "%osedition%" specific features.
+echo Changing this edition may not remove "%osedition%"-specific features.
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 7 key to continue..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [7] to continue anyway..."
 choice /c 7 /n
 cls
 )
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ if not defined _ntarget (
 %line%
 echo:
 if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %Red% "DISM.exe is not working."
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Target Edition not found."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Target editions not found."
 echo Current Edition [%osedition% ^| %winbuild%] can not be changed to any other Edition.
 %line%
 goto dk_done
@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ set targetedition=
 
 %line%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "You can change the Edition [%osedition%] [%fullbuild%] to one of the following."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "You can change the edition [%osedition%] [%fullbuild%] to one of the following."
 %showeditionerror%
 if defined dismnotworking (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM.exe is not working."
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@ set targetedition!counter!=%%A
 echo:
 echo [0]  %_exitmsg%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter option number in keyboard, and press "Enter":"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter an option number using your keyboard and press Enter to confirm:"
 set /p inpt=
 if "%inpt%"=="" goto cedmenu2
 if "%inpt%"=="0" exit /b
@@ -483,12 +483,12 @@ echo:
 call :dk_color %Red% "==== Note ===="
 echo:
 echo Once the edition is changed to "%targetedition%", 
-echo system may not be able to properly change edition to any other later.
+echo the system may not be able to properly change edition later.
 echo:
-echo [1] Continue
+echo [1] Continue Anyway
 echo [0] Go Back
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 goto cedmenu2
 if !errorlevel!==1 rem
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ set key=
 set _chan=
 set _dismapi=0
 
-::  Check if DISM Api or slmgr.vbs is required for edition upgrade
+::  Check if DISM API or slmgr.vbs is required for edition upgrade
 
 if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\%targetedition%\" (
 echo %_wtarget% | find /i " %targetedition% " || (
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ set _chan=Retail
 if not defined key (
 %eline%
 echo [%targetedition% ^| %winbuild%]
-echo Unable to get product key from pkeyhelper.dll
+echo Failed to get product key from pkeyhelper.dll.
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -544,13 +544,13 @@ cls
 echo:
 %showeditionerror%
 if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "DISM.exe is not working."
-echo Changing the Current Edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]
+echo Changing the current edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]...
 echo:
 
 if %_dismapi%==1 (
-call :dk_color %Green% "Notes-"
+call :dk_color %Green% "Notes -"
 echo:
-echo  - Save your work before continue, system will auto restart.
+echo  - Save your work before continuing, the system will auto-restart.
 echo:
 echo  - You will need to activate with HWID option once the edition is changed.
 %line%
@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ if !errorlevel!==1 exit /b
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
 if %_dismapi%==0 (
-echo Installing %_chan% Key [%key%]
+echo Installing %_chan% key [%key%]
 echo:
 if %_wmic% EQU 1 wmic path %sps% where __CLASS='%sps%' call InstallProductKey ProductKey="%key%" %nul%
 if %_wmic% EQU 0 %psc% "try { $null=(([WMISEARCHER]'SELECT Version FROM %sps%').Get()).InstallProductKey('%key%'); exit 0 } catch { exit $_.Exception.InnerException.HResult }" %nul%
@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ if !keyerror! EQU 0 (
 call :dk_refresh
 call :dk_color %Green% "[Successful]"
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Reboot is required to properly change the Edition."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Reboot is required to fully change the edition."
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %Red% "[Unsuccessful] [Error Code: !keyerror!]"
 echo:
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 
 if %_dismapi%==1 (
 echo:
-echo Applying the DISM API method with %_chan% Key %key%. Please wait...
+echo Applying the DISM API method with %_chan% key %key%. Please wait...
 echo:
 
 call :ced_prep
@@ -614,9 +614,9 @@ if defined rebootreq goto dk_done
 echo:
 %showeditionerror%
 if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM.exe is not working."
-echo Changing the Current Edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]
+echo Changing the current edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]...
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Important - Save your work before continue, system will auto reboot."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Important - Save your work before continuing, the system will auto-restart."
 echo:
 choice /C:01 /N /M "[1] Continue [0] %_exitmsg% : "
 if %errorlevel%==1 exit /b
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@ if not defined key call :changeeditiondata
 if not defined key (
 %eline%
 echo [%targetedition% ^| %winbuild%]
-echo Unable to get product key from pkeyhelper.dll
+echo Failed to get product key from pkeyhelper.dll.
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -671,13 +671,13 @@ cls
 echo:
 %showeditionerror%
 if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM.exe is not working."
-echo Changing the Current Edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]
+echo Changing the current edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]...
 echo:
 
 call :ced_prep
 if defined preperror goto dk_done
 
-echo Applying the command with %_chan% Key
+echo Applying the command with %_chan% key...
 echo DISM /online /Set-Edition:%targetedition% /ProductKey:%key% /AcceptEula
 DISM /online /Set-Edition:%targetedition% /ProductKey:%key% /AcceptEula
 
@@ -699,8 +699,8 @@ for /f %%a in ('%psc% "(Get-Date).ToString('yyyyMMdd-HHmmssfff')"') do set _time
 
 sc query TrustedInstaller | find /i "RUNNING" %nul% && (
 %eline%
-echo Failed to stop TrustedInstaller service.
-echo Try again or Restart your system and then try again.
+echo Failed to stop the TrustedInstaller service.
+echo Restart your system and try again.
 set preperror=1
 exit /b
 )
@@ -731,9 +731,9 @@ call :compresslog DISM\dism_%_time%.log ChangeEdition_Logs\DISM %nul%
 
 echo:
 if %winbuild% GEQ 9200 %psc% "if ((Get-WindowsOptionalFeature -Online -FeatureName NetFx3).State -eq 'Enabled') {Write-Host 'Checking .NET Framework 3.5 Status - Enabled'}"
-echo Log files are copied to the ChangeEdition_Logs folder on the desktop.
+echo Log files are copied to the ChangeEdition_Logs folder on your desktop.
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "In case of errors, restart system before trying again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "In case there are errors, you should restart the system before trying again."
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%change_edition_issues
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%change_edition_issues"
@@ -891,7 +891,7 @@ reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows\CurrentVersion\WindowsUpdate\Auto Upd
 
 if defined rebootreq (
 %eline%
-echo Pending Reboot flags found.
+echo Pending reboot flags found.
 echo:
 echo Make sure Windows is fully updated, restart the system and try again.
 )
@@ -987,13 +987,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -121,13 +121,13 @@ call :dk_setvar
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent.
+echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto done2
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto done2
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ goto done2
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto done2
 )
 
@@ -248,14 +248,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ set "_dir=%desktop%\$OEM$\$$\Setup\Scripts"
 
 if exist "!desktop!\" (
 %eline%
-echo Desktop location was not detected, aborting...
+echo Unable to detect Desktop location, aborting...
 goto done2
 )
 
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if not defined terminal mode 78, 30
 if exist "!desktop!\$OEM$\" (
 echo _____________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo $OEM$ folder already exists on the Desktop.
+echo The $OEM$ folder already exists on your Desktop.
 echo _____________________________________________________
 goto done2
 )
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ call :dk_color2 %_White% "              [R] " %_Green% "ReadMe"
 echo:              [0] Exit
 echo:           ________________________________________________________
 echo:  
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "             " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard :"
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "             " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard :"
 choice /C:123456789R0 /N
 set _erl=%errorlevel%
 
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ cd \
 :errorfound
 
 %eline%
-echo $OEM$ Folder was not created successfully...
+echo The script failed to create the $OEM$ folder.
 goto :done2
 
 :done
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ goto :done2
 echo ______________________________________________________________
 echo:
 call :dk_color %Blue% "%oem%"
-call :dk_color %Green% "$OEM$ folder is successfully created on the Desktop."
+call :dk_color %Green% "$OEM$ folder was successfully created on your Desktop."
 echo "%oem%" | find /i "38" %nul% && (
 echo:
 echo To KMS38 activate Server Cor/Acor editions ^(No GUI Versions^),
@@ -701,13 +701,13 @@ echo ______________________________________________________________
 
 echo:
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Troubleshoot.cmd

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -122,13 +122,13 @@ set "line=______________________________________________________________________
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent.
+echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
+::  Fix special character limitations in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -148,8 +148,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
-echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file.
+echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
 goto dk_done
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ goto dk_done
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
 echo This script needs admin rights.
-echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
+echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -249,14 +249,14 @@ if not "%%#"=="" (echo "%%#" | find "127.69" %nul1% && (echo "%%#" | find "127.6
 if defined old (
 echo ________________________________________________
 %eline%
-echo Version %masver% of MAS is outdated.
+echo Your version of MAS [%masver%] is outdated.
 echo ________________________________________________
 echo:
 if not %_unattended%==1 (
 echo [1] Get Latest MAS
 echo [0] Continue Anyway
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard [1,0] :"
+call :dk_color %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard [1,0] :"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==2 rem
 if !errorlevel!==1 (start ht%-%tps://github.com/mass%-%gravel/Microsoft-Acti%-%vation-Scripts & start %mas% & exit /b)
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if not defined desktop for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "& {write-host $([Environ
 
 if not defined desktop (
 %eline%
-echo Desktop location was not detected, aborting...
+echo Unable to detect Desktop location, aborting...
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ echo:
 echo:             [0] %_exitmsg%
 echo:       _______________________________________________________________
 echo:          
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "            " %_Green% "Enter a menu option in the Keyboard :"
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "            " %_Green% "Choose a menu option using your keyboard :"
 choice /C:1234560 /N
 set _erl=%errorlevel%
 
@@ -333,8 +333,8 @@ title  Dism /English /Online /Cleanup-Image /RestoreHealth
 
 if %winbuild% LSS 9200 (
 %eline%
-echo Unsupported OS version Detected.
-echo This command is supported only for Windows 8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent.
+echo Unsupported OS version detected.
+echo This command only works on Windows 8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto :at_back
 )
 
@@ -352,14 +352,14 @@ call :dk_color2 %_White% "     " %Red% "Checking Internet Connection  [Not conne
 
 echo %line%
 echo:
-echo      Dism uses Windows Update to provide the files required to fix corruption.
+echo      DISM uses Windows Update to provide replacement files required to fix corruption.
 echo      This will take 5-15 minutes or more..
 echo %line%
 echo:
 echo      Notes:
 echo:
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "     - " %Gray% "Make sure the Internet is connected."
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "     - " %Gray% "Make sure the Windows update is properly working."
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "     - " %Gray% "Make sure the internet is connected."
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "     - " %Gray% "Make sure that Windows update is properly working."
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ del /f /q "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\cbs.log" %nul%
 del /f /q "%SystemRoot%\logs\DISM\dism.log" %nul%
 
 echo:
-echo Applying the command,
+echo Applying the command...
 echo dism /english /online /cleanup-image /restorehealth
 dism /english /online /cleanup-image /restorehealth
 
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ copy /y /b "%SystemRoot%\logs\DISM\dism.log" "!desktop!\AT_Logs\RHealth_DISM_%_t
 )
 
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "CBS and DISM logs are copied to the AT_Logs folder on the desktop."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "CBS and DISM logs are copied to the AT_Logs folder on your desktop."
 goto :at_back
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -414,7 +414,8 @@ title  sfc /scannow
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:    
-echo      System File Checker will repair missing or corrupted system files.
+echo      SFC will repair missing or corrupted system files.
+echo      It is recommended you run the DISM option first before this one.
 echo      This will take 10-15 minutes or more..
 echo:
 echo      If SFC could not fix something, then run the command again to see if it may be able 
@@ -435,7 +436,7 @@ copy /y /b "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\cbs.log" "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\backup_cbs_%_t
 del /f /q "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\cbs.log" %nul%
 
 echo:
-echo Applying the command,
+echo Applying the command...
 echo sfc /scannow
 sfc /scannow
 
@@ -450,7 +451,7 @@ copy /y /b "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\cbs.log" "!desktop!\AT_Logs\SFC_CBS_%_time%.lo
 )
 
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "CBS log is copied to the AT_Logs folder on the desktop."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "The CBS log was copied to the AT_Logs folder on your Desktop."
 goto :at_back
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -469,17 +470,17 @@ echo %line%
 echo:   
 echo      Notes:
 echo:
-echo       - It helps in troubleshooting activation issues.
+echo       - This option helps in troubleshooting activation issues.
 echo:
-echo       - This option will,
-echo            - Deactivate Windows and Office, you may need to reactivate
-echo              If Windows is activated with motherboard / OEM / Digital license then don't worry
+echo       - This option will:
+echo            - Deactivate Windows and Office, you may need to reactivate.
+echo              If Windows is activated with motherboard / OEM / Digital license then Windows will activate itself again.
 echo:
-echo            - Clear ClipSVC, SPP and OSPP licenses
-echo            - Fix SPP permissions of tokens folder and registries
+echo            - Clear ClipSVC, SPP and OSPP licenses.
+echo            - Fix permissions of SPP tokens folder and registries.
 echo            - Trigger the repair option for Office.
 echo:
-call :dk_color2 %_White% "      - " %Red% "Apply it only when it is necessary."
+call :dk_color2 %_White% "      - " %Red% "Apply this option only when it is necessary."
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
@@ -496,11 +497,11 @@ cls
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Rebuilding ClipSVC Licences"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Rebuilding ClipSVC Licenses..."
 echo:
 
 if %winbuild% LSS 10240 (
-echo ClipSVC Licence rebuilding is supported only on Win 10/11 and Server equivalent.
+echo ClipSVC license rebuilding is supported only on Windows 10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 echo Skipping...
 goto :rebuildspptok
 )
@@ -516,7 +517,7 @@ echo Stopping ClipSVC service...
 timeout /t 2 %nul%
 
 echo:
-echo Applying the command to Clean ClipSVC Licences...
+echo Applying the command to clean ClipSVC Licenses...
 echo rundll32 clipc.dll,ClipCleanUpState
 
 rundll32 clipc.dll,ClipCleanUpState
@@ -545,15 +546,15 @@ echo Deleting a Volatile ^& Protected Registry Key...
 echo [%RegKey%]
 reg query "%RegKey%" %nul% && (
 call :dk_color %Red% "[Failed]"
-echo Restart the system, that will delete this registry key automatically.
+echo Restart your system, that will delete this registry key automatically.
 ) || (
 echo [Successful]
 )
 
-::   Clear HWID token related registry to fix activation incase if there is any corruption
+::   Clear HWID token related registry to fix activation incase there is any corruption
 
 echo:
-echo Deleting a IdentityCRL Registry Key...
+echo Deleting IdentityCRL Registry Key...
 echo [%_ident%]
 reg delete "%_ident%" /f %nul%
 reg query "%_ident%" %nul% && (
@@ -568,7 +569,7 @@ echo [Successful]
 
 echo:
 if %winbuild% GTR 10240 (
-echo Deleting Folder %ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\
+echo Deleting folder %ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\
 rmdir /s /q "C:\ProgramData\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSvc" %nul%
 
 if exist "%ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\" (
@@ -578,7 +579,7 @@ echo [Successful]
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Rebuilding Folder %ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\
+echo Rebuilding the %ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\ folder...
 %psc% Start-Service ClipSVC %nul%
 timeout /t 3 %nul%
 if not exist "%ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\" timeout /t 5 %nul%
@@ -590,7 +591,7 @@ echo [Successful]
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Restarting [wlidsvc LicenseManager] services...
+echo Restarting wlidsvc ^& LicenseManager services...
 for %%# in (wlidsvc LicenseManager) do (%psc% "Start-Job { Restart-Service %%# } | Wait-Job -Timeout 10 | Out-Null")
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -602,7 +603,7 @@ for %%# in (wlidsvc LicenseManager) do (%psc% "Start-Job { Restart-Service %%# }
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Rebuilding SPP Licensing Tokens"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Rebuilding SPP licensing tokens..."
 echo:
 
 call :scandat check
@@ -684,7 +685,7 @@ echo:
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Reinstalling System Licenses...
+echo Reinstalling system licenses...
 %psc% "Stop-Service sppsvc -force; $sls = Get-WmiObject SoftwareLicensingService; $f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':xrm\:.*';iex ($f[1]); ReinstallLicenses" %nul%
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 %psc% "$sls = Get-WmiObject SoftwareLicensingService; $f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':xrm\:.*';iex ($f[1]); ReinstallLicenses" %nul%
 if %errorlevel% EQU 0 (
@@ -697,7 +698,7 @@ call :scandat check
 
 echo:
 if not defined token (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Failed to rebuilt tokens.dat file."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Failed to rebuild tokens.dat file."
 ) else (
 echo tokens.dat file was rebuilt successfully.
 )
@@ -713,11 +714,11 @@ sc config sppuinotify start= demand
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Rebuilding OSPP Licensing Tokens"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Rebuilding OSPP licensing tokens..."
 echo:
 
 sc qc osppsvc %nul% || (
-echo OSPP based Office is not installed
+echo OSPP-based Office is not installed.
 echo Skipping rebuilding OSPP tokens...
 goto :repairoffice
 )
@@ -745,7 +746,7 @@ echo:
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Starting osppsvc service to generate tokens.dat
+echo Starting osppsvc service to generate tokens.dat...
 %psc% Start-Service osppsvc %nul%
 call :scandatospp check
 if not defined token (
@@ -758,7 +759,7 @@ call :scandatospp check
 
 echo:
 if not defined token (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Failed to rebuilt tokens.dat file."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Failed to rebuild tokens.dat file."
 ) else (
 echo tokens.dat file was rebuilt successfully.
 )
@@ -770,7 +771,7 @@ echo tokens.dat file was rebuilt successfully.
 echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Repairing Office Licenses"
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Repairing Office licenses..."
 echo:
 
 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Control\Session Manager\Environment" /v PROCESSOR_ARCHITECTURE') do set arch=%%b
@@ -837,8 +838,8 @@ set /a counter+=1
 
 if %counter% GTR 1 (
 %eline%
-echo Multiple office versions found.
-echo It's recommended to install only one version of office.
+echo Multiple Office versions found.
+echo It is recommended to only install one version of Office.
 echo ________________________________________________________________
 echo:
 )
@@ -850,9 +851,9 @@ goto :repairend
 echo:
 ) else (
 echo:
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "A Window will popup, in that Window you need to select [Quick] Repair Option..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "A new window will appear, in that window you need to select [Quick Repair] option."
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to continue..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] to continue..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to continue..."
@@ -862,8 +863,8 @@ pause %nul1%
 
 if defined uwp16 (
 echo:
-echo Note: Skipping repair for Office 16.0 UWP. 
-echo       You need to use reset option in Windows settings for it.
+echo Note: Skipping repair for Office 16.0 UWP... 
+echo       You need to use the Reset option in Windows Settings instead.
 echo ________________________________________________________________
 echo:
 start ms-settings:appsfeatures
@@ -875,8 +876,8 @@ if defined c2r14_86 set c2r14=1
 
 if defined c2r14 (
 echo:
-echo Note: Skipping repair for Office 14.0 C2R 
-echo       You need to use Repair option in Windows settings for it.
+echo Note: Skipping repair for Office 14.0 C2R...
+echo       You need to use the Repair option in Windows Settings for it.
 echo ________________________________________________________________
 echo:
 start appwiz.cpl
@@ -923,7 +924,7 @@ title  Fix WMI
 
 if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-Server*Edition~*.mum" (
 %eline%
-echo WMI rebuild is not recommended on Windows Server. Aborting...
+echo Rebuilding WMI is not recommended on Windows Server, aborting...
 goto :at_back
 )
 
@@ -941,7 +942,7 @@ call :checkwmi
 
 if not defined error (
 echo [Working]
-echo No need to apply this option. Aborting...
+echo No need to apply this option, aborting...
 goto :at_back
 )
 
@@ -956,7 +957,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 echo:
 if defined _corrupt (
 %eline%
-echo Winmgmt service is corrupted. Aborting...
+echo Winmgmt service is corrupted, aborting...
 goto :at_back
 )
 
@@ -1078,7 +1079,7 @@ echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."
@@ -1122,7 +1123,7 @@ exit /b
 
 :checkperms
 
-::  This code checks if SPP has permission access to tokens folder and required registry keys. It's often caused by gaming spoofers.
+::  This code checks if SPP has permission access to tokens folder and required registry keys. Incorrect permissions are often set by gaming spoofers.
 
 set permerror=
 if not exist "%tokenstore%\" set "permerror=Error Found In Token Folder"
@@ -1370,13 +1371,13 @@ $key.SetAccessControl($acl)
 
 echo:
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to open Troubleshoot page " %Gray% " Press [0] to ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."